Finally,after 2 (or more) weeks im out of blockade! So anyhow this is my latest work.I'd like to see CNC ^^

Organize them effects, sig needs a better compo.
Texto is baddy, and there's way too much dead space in the right.
Lighting is not well placed and needs lots of work, look at your render's shadows that should help with placement, and to make it better try techniques other than soft brush.
Blurred C4D in first plane is incoherent.
KIU

basically everything was mention
but i think the txt was the best actually in the tag it self
your getting lazy with this solid c4d

looks pretty hot to me obito but then again im not a gfx expert

Suicide.