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Heaven Academy: a DA Novel.

Post by Linda-Senpai on Thu Nov 26, 2015 4:51 pm

Hai guys, tl;dr: I'm writing a novel inspired by Duel Academy, with the MC based off myself. Currently there's two chapters, in process of writing the third.

You can read it at the link below

https://www.wattpad.com/187461117-heaven-academy-prologue

If you cant for whatever reason, here's another link to each chapter
http://sta.sh/01k9fhhzn96j
http://sta.sh/0t0f13doe1g
http://sta.sh/0be92zdwlrt
http://sta.sh/01kmk2nmq45i
http://sta.sh/01nz6zkem8qr

Please let me know what you think :D if you really like it, follow and comment on Wattpad as your way to contribute, tyvm


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Re: Heaven Academy: a DA Novel.

Post by Guest on Thu Nov 26, 2015 5:39 pm

Can't wait for chapter 3. +1

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Re: Heaven Academy: a DA Novel.

Post by Anzo on Thu Nov 26, 2015 7:04 pm

Interesting, keep going with this.


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Re: Heaven Academy: a DA Novel.

Post by Linda-Senpai on Thu Nov 26, 2015 7:43 pm

ty Botto and Anzo :D I will try to have chapter 3 done by the end of the week.


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Re: Heaven Academy: a DA Novel.

Post by Anzo on Thu Nov 26, 2015 8:00 pm

Alright.

I'm into writing and but I lack the style. Reading through this might actually be of a good help for me. So do your best Wink


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Re: Heaven Academy: a DA Novel.

Post by DeathStalker on Fri Nov 27, 2015 2:09 am

Who am i? .........The guy who kills the MC?


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Re: Heaven Academy: a DA Novel.

Post by DDS on Fri Nov 27, 2015 11:22 am

Finally got to make some time in the day to have a read of this. The setting and general atmosphere is nicely described and the introduction of the cast so far has been amusing (in a good way) I'm interested to see how things go from here! ^^


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Re: Heaven Academy: a DA Novel.

Post by BlackJack on Fri Nov 27, 2015 4:46 pm

I hope I'm in this Mad


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Re: Heaven Academy: a DA Novel.

Post by Linda-Senpai on Fri Nov 27, 2015 6:47 pm

ty@DDs :D

@Death and @FlapJack: You guys werent around back in the day <.< so if you are to be in it, it's gonna probably have to be in like book 2 or book 3 (this is gonna be a series)

If you guys would like characters in this, though, you can send me information on your characters appearance and personality and I will see what I can do with it. I cant make any promises on if Id be able to include your chars or not or when, but who knows? You might see yourself sooner than expected.


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Re: Heaven Academy: a DA Novel.

Post by Dex on Sat Nov 28, 2015 1:00 pm

Take this from somebody who has written an unpublished novel. Not from the guy who simply doesnt like you. What youve wrotten, and considering your age, youre an excellent writer. The way you deacribed the gate was elegant, and the academy uniform also. Keep writing, plan the plot and finish. The biggest obstacle writers have to overcome are the lies we tell ourselves. Who are you writing this for? Keep it off the internet until it can be published. If you want some guidence on how to do so msg me.

Edit: even if you were an adult youde still be a good writer. Just saying this is like genius level shit from a 13 year old boy.  Twisted Evil


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Re: Heaven Academy: a DA Novel.

Post by BlackJack on Sat Nov 28, 2015 2:19 pm

I've been at this academy for three years almost ._.


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Re: Heaven Academy: a DA Novel.

Post by DeathStalker on Sat Nov 28, 2015 3:30 pm

Who the hell keeps hacking Dex? Or is it Dex himself lol; an eclipse it is


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Re: Heaven Academy: a DA Novel.

Post by JC the shadow hunter on Sat Nov 28, 2015 5:41 pm

This was actually pretty entertaining

though i only know some characters that you picked out from here >.<

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Re: Heaven Academy: a DA Novel.

Post by Galaksii on Sun Nov 29, 2015 1:40 pm

Readin' is fuun, good job N :D

Give her some kind of award @Anzo for this


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Re: Heaven Academy: a DA Novel.

Post by Linda-Senpai on Fri Dec 04, 2015 8:58 pm

@Dex wrote:Take this from somebody who has written an unpublished novel. Not from the guy who simply doesnt like you. What youve wrotten, and considering your age, youre an excellent writer. The way you deacribed the gate was elegant, and the academy uniform also. Keep writing, plan the plot and finish. The biggest obstacle writers have to overcome are the lies we tell ourselves. Who are you writing this for? Keep it off the internet until it can be published. If you want some guidence on how to do so msg me.

Edit: even if you were an adult youde still be a good writer. Just saying this is like genius level shit from a 13 year old boy.  Twisted Evil
Thank you :D

Also guys, unfortunately I'm finding myself far too busy with work to finish ch3 at all >.< having to stay an extra hour for both my shifts...

Edit: and im not a 13 year old boy im a 17 year old girl .-.


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Re: Heaven Academy: a DA Novel.

Post by Heartbreaker on Fri Dec 04, 2015 9:06 pm

Sounds pretty good. I'm sure the punctuation is average which is good for you. But, I was just scrolling through and saw this post so I didn't read all of it. Has a good story line and everything. But what inspired you to write this and if so how do you expect to show it to more people? If you need anymore feedback let me know.

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Re: Heaven Academy: a DA Novel.

Post by Linda-Senpai on Fri Dec 04, 2015 9:30 pm

@Heartbreaker wrote:Sounds pretty good. I'm sure the punctuation is average which is good for you. But, I was just scrolling through and saw this post so I didn't read all of it. Has a good story line and everything. But what inspired you to write this and if so how do you expect to show it to more people? If you need anymore feedback let me know.
I got inspired to right by me and Spade joking around on skype actually lol.


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Re: Heaven Academy: a DA Novel.

Post by Guest on Fri Dec 04, 2015 10:02 pm

@Linda-Senpai wrote:Also guys, unfortunately I'm finding myself far too busy with work to finish ch3 at all >.< having to stay an extra hour for both my shifts...
Take your time. Everyone knows stories are better when made with more time spent on them, not less so it comes out faster.

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Re: Heaven Academy: a DA Novel.

Post by Heartbreaker on Sat Dec 05, 2015 1:42 am

@Linda-Senpai wrote:
@Heartbreaker wrote:Sounds pretty good. I'm sure the punctuation is average which is good for you. But, I was just scrolling through and saw this post so I didn't read all of it. Has a good story line and everything. But what inspired you to write this and if so how do you expect to show it to more people? If you need anymore feedback let me know.
I got inspired to right by me and Spade joking around on skype actually lol.

Sounds cool.

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Re: Heaven Academy: a DA Novel.

Post by BlackJack on Sat Dec 05, 2015 4:48 am

I joined a year after you did so maybe that can be a thing. Other then that I don't particularly want to describe how I look and act unless I'm guaranteed a spot in the book. Other then that I hope you can find time to do what you enjoy.


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Re: Heaven Academy: a DA Novel.

Post by Linda-Senpai on Wed Dec 09, 2015 8:07 pm

@BlackJack wrote:I joined a year after you did so maybe that can be a thing. Other then that I don't particularly want to describe how I look and act unless I'm guaranteed a spot in the book. Other then that I hope you can find time to do what you enjoy.
You don't have to describe yourself IRL, just how you would want your character to be.


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Re: Heaven Academy: a DA Novel.

Post by Linda-Senpai on Sat Dec 26, 2015 2:45 am

Welp ch3 and ch4 are wrote but they are unedited, so read with caution. Content is subject to change when edited but I'll inform you guys with the edited versions once they are done.

Also, important: I made a mistake in ch1 where I said that Rika's sister went to Heaven Academy. This is false, she was homeschooled.

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Re: Heaven Academy: a DA Novel.

Post by Booked on Sat Dec 26, 2015 4:23 am

I sensed BOOKS and I saw BOOKS, I am satisfied now.... thanks, though this is probably not meant to be one, but thanks for the Christmas Gift!


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Re: Heaven Academy: a DA Novel.

Post by Linda-Senpai on Sat Dec 26, 2015 4:36 am

this is indeed meant to be a book.


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Post by Booked on Sat Dec 26, 2015 4:40 am

I mean, not meant to be a Christmas gift lol, I know this is a book >.> Anyways, BOOKS mentioned within a BOOK is like the best!


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Re: Heaven Academy: a DA Novel.

Post by DDS on Sat Dec 26, 2015 4:41 am

So far the transition from describing the setting, to developing the first couple of plot points is going smoothly.

I look forward to seeing how you expand on them! ^^

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One inconsistency I found  that needs editing though.. The numbers on Rika's work completion percentage Before heading off to the cafeteria she was stated to be disappointed at only getting to 45% but in the resulting conversation its said her completion is a 30% or so then she went on to 45% by working later into the night. 


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Re: Heaven Academy: a DA Novel.

Post by Linda-Senpai on Sat Dec 26, 2015 8:10 pm

thnx@Books and DDS Smile

ch3 is edited now http://sta.sh/01kmk2nmq45i


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