Help Me to fix it plz

Updated

-2 Fine (-1)
-2 Cheerful Coffin(-1)
-2 Dangerous Machine(???)
-2 Newdoria(???)
-2 Dark Resonator(Raven can synchro faster)
-1 Vandalgyon (???)
-1 BlackHorn of Heaven(???)
(-12)
+1 Rigorous Reaver
+1 Reign Beaux (Overlord?)
+1 Card Destruction
+2 Darkness Neosphere (Backup, DW monster has 2500 max atk)
+2 Fiend Roar Deity Raven
+2 Forced Requisition (rapes your opponent hand)
+3 Creature Swap (Swap morphing/Reaver for 2nd effect of DW)
(+12)
+Synchro monster definitely

the rest is up to you but adding gorz/trago wouldn't hurt, but please tune it down into 40-43
having card like Morphing jar/Card Destruction in the opening hand would be great.

thanks for the tips

still with 47 cards :/

take out all traps
-9 traps
+ mirror
+torrential
+call of the haunted
+2 bottomless
+starlight road
+2prison

8 traps in total

at monsters
take out the 3 monsters aafter jar and the next 2 before card destruction thats -5 monsters
+1 deity raven (3 is a must)
+sangan
+dad
+2 dark resonator
Thats 5

Spells
-2 swap
+1 gateway to dark world
-2 spells after gateway
-the 3 spells after lightning
+monster reborn
+dark hole
+2 MST

total -3
total 42 cards

thanks

last update done :b