this is my firsr try to make such a deck , its doing well in duels but i had alot of dead draws .. so i thought why not to ask for a fix xD

Monsters :

x3 Herald of perfection
x3 sonic bird
x3 manji of the thousand hand
x3 happy lover
x3 mokey mokey
x3 mystical shine ball
x2 honest
x1 gorz
x1 tragoedia

Spells:

x3 dawn of the herald
x1 advanced retaul art
x3 dark factory of production
x1 dark hole
x1 mind control
x1 enemy contrller
x1 monster reborn


Traps:

x2 Bottomless trap hole
x3 D-Prison
x1 Mirror force
x1 Solmn Judgment
x1 TT

First take the sonic birds out just keep manju there is a spell that gets you a ritual monster from deck and a ritual spell from grave forgot name

3 Bottomless ?
Use torrential
And call of the haunted
Maybe some tuners ? there are herald monsters that are tuners i think

Deck Last Update :

Cards Removed:
-1 Mokey Mokey
-1 Tragodia
-3 D-Prison
-2 Bottomless Trao hole

Cards Added:
x3 Dunames Dark Witch
x2 herald of orabge light
x1 Denju of the thousand hand
x3 Royal Decree

-3 Sonic Bird
-1 Gorz
-1 Tragoedia
-3 Mystical Shine Ball
-1 BTH
+2 Sejnu
+2 Herald of Orange Light
+3 Archlord Kristya
+2 Soul of Purity
+2 Alchemist

-2 Dawn of the Herald
-1 Mind Control
-1 Enemy Controller
+1 Level 6 Normal Fairy
+1 Preparation of Rites
+2 MST

-8 ur Traps
+3 Royal Decree
+1 Pot of Avarice
+1 Gaint Trunade
+1 Call of the Haunted
+2 Book of Moon

Fixes from lates deck:

-2 Herald of Orange Light
-2 Mystical Shine Ball
-2 Senju
-1 Gorz
-1 Dunames
+3 Sonic Bird
+1 Mokey Mokey

-1 Dawn of the Herald
-1 Mind Control
-1 Call of the Haunted
+1 Preparation of Rites
+2 Pot of Avarice
+2 Book of Moon
+2 Mystical Space Typhoon

Last Update :

Monsters:
x3 herald of perfection
x3 manju
x3 happy lover
x3 mokey mokey
x2 honest
x1 gorz
x1 dunames
x2 Archlord Kristya
x1 soul of purity
x3 sonic bird

spells:
x1 dawn of the herald
x1 advanced retaul art
x3 dark facroty of mass prodection
x1 dark hole
x1 monster reborn
x2 Preparation of Rites
x2 Pot of Avarice
x2 Book of moon
x2 MST

Traps:
x1 TT
x1 Mirroe force
x3 royal decree